Free tool
Cold message clarity checker
Paste a cold LinkedIn or email message. You get a clarity score and a list of specific fixes: jargon, length, more than one ask, extra links and unfilled placeholders.
- Good: 57 words is a comfortable length.
- Fix: Jargon makes people stop reading: portal, workspaces. Say what you actually do in plain words.
- Good: One clear ask.
A writing aid, not a prediction of replies.
Frequently asked questions
What does this checker look at?
Length, jargon, how many asks the message makes, extra links, unfilled placeholders, whether it talks about the reader or about you, and common openers people have read many times. It gives a score and a list of specific fixes.
Is the score a prediction of replies?
No. It is a clarity check based on common writing problems, not a prediction. A clear message still needs the right person and the right offer.
Does it store or send my message?
No. It runs in your browser and nothing is sent or saved.
Why does jargon matter so much in cold messages?
People decide in a few seconds whether a message is for them. Vague words like platform, solution and workflow make it unclear what you actually do, so they stop reading or ask what you mean.
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